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Pale the Rose by Comparison
by Vivian L Dawson
Friday, June 22, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Gazing at the morning dew
a presence of petals in soft
pink lying next to me in our
bed filtering sun on her golden
hair flowing around a peaceful
face seemingly smiling back at
me

Sleep my love as I embrace your
beauty for there is a lifetime of consummation ahead for us 

Remembrance of frolicking upon
the beach just watching fireflies
light the night, majestic mountains
wanting to be admired by land or
sea..side by side holding hands as
people take notice of our glowing

For when the mountain tops have
shared their snow upon our heads
our gardens will continually grow
and blossom with our love in
appreciation of joyfulness being
not afraid of thorns along the
resurgence for due diligence
rewarding amazing grace
and elegance of love in return

(c) Pale the Rose by Comparison
21June2012
Vivian L Dawson

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Breathless!
Reviewed by Felix Perry
The striking comparison of love and roses is such a sweet comparison that as poets we tend to want to entwine the two. You have done this soo well in this one.
Fee
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Vivian,
this is a lovingly portrayed picture of love lasting life long with endearing shared affection. beautiful.
Budd
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
When love is true, it becomes a garden of delights that faces the challenges of life with love.

Ron
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
This has a really serene, dreamy quality, the words paint the picture vividly and the present, past, future segments blend seamlessly. Good work.
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Elegance in romantic splendor glowing in this lovliest
of poetic grace Lady Vivian. ~Lady Mary Ann~
Reviewed by Laura Fall
Lovely poetry my friend and such a beautiful photo laura
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Don't know how I missed this beauty yesterday unless it was posted after I was in bed.

Love the way you use the mountains to tell of the love which will be remember far into the romance of it. Beautiful.
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