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Left Behind
by Christine Alwin
Friday, June 29, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Left Behind

Wings fell with her tears,
swept  away, in currents blue,
sea  legs…broken heart

 

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Reviewed by JMS Bell 7/4/2012
'...WINGS FELL WITH HER TEARS...' THIS IS SO POETIC! SO AUTHENTICALLY DESCRIPTIVE OF HOW ONE FEELS WHEN LOVE HAS LEFT THEM BEHIND. CHRISTINE...THANK YOU, ONCE AGAIN,FOR SHARING YOUR AWESOME GIFT WITH US. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 7/3/2012
Romatick....tragic...and beautifully penned as usual!


Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 6/30/2012
A stillness beautiful in deep emotions.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley 6/29/2012
Brilliant Poem.
You're my muse
That sends me writing all night.
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 6/29/2012
I can see the inspiration your
words so delicately describe!!!
*Christine*

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by pat medlin 6/29/2012
oh christine this is exquisitly moving...few words revealing separatep meanings to each heart reading it. i feel as though you penned this exclusivly for me
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 6/29/2012
It only takes but a few words to explain all and done very well Christine, the picture in itself says more than words can say.

Very good!

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Laura Fall 6/29/2012
So deeply touching indeed Laura
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE 6/29/2012
I appreciate this vivid haiku, and am swept out to see those bereft of freedom alluded to in its cool lines. Evocative and emotive...

Nicely penned, Christine.

Roger
Reviewed by Shirley Houston 6/29/2012
This is an exquisite write! I feel her pain, and lost innocence. Thank you, poet!
Reviewed by John Domino 6/29/2012
Dear Christine,

This is a lovely poetic haiku.
I love the sea.
It's where you go to.
It heals us when your sad and blue.
But we should never forget.
The oceans changing tides.
For The Lord God knows our pain.
He knows all of us deep down inside.

Peace, love and blessings,

JMD
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/29/2012
A stirring poem that grips the heart and breaks the soul and one that begs for a reply of sorts....

Heart mirrored image
left him the way she found him
drowning far from shore
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 6/29/2012
Nice senryu, Christine, and great picture to go with it. The angel sans wings and tearful, with a broken heart is enough to make the reader sad. Yep. Ya did good here.



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