by Christine Alwin
Sunday, July 01, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Wings of a Kiss
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Kiss me, in shadows of silent night,
where dreams dance in beams of moonlight,
captivated, within your heart,
where lullabies beat, from the start
Hold me, for all your tomorrows,
I'll fly with you, where the crow goes,
there is no other place I’d rather be,
it can’t be that hard for you to see
Inhale me now, till sunsets end,
sunflowers reflect and bow their head,
whispers of gossip heard in the wind,
our novel buried, written on a whim
~Love me till the end…
… through the beginning~
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|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|the 'Kiss me and the 'Hold me'
are strong enough but then the
'Inhale me now' is the knockout;
writing of poignancy and tenderness
and tremendous focus.
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Throughly Enjoyed, Christine!
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|A FINE POEM, OVERFLOWING WITH PHRASES AND IMAGERY WHICH PAINT A PICTURE OF TOTAL SURRENDER...TO ALL THAT LOVE IS AND...EVEN MORE. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS OFFERING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Shirley Houston
|This is so lovely and soothing. A deep, yet comfortable kinda' love!|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|so romanticaally wistful...i especially like..............ALL OF IT!|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Enchanting write, sweet lady! Wonderful phrasing!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You are a virtuoso at these melodic gems!
Love the ending, beginning, and everything in the balance!
Bless you, hope all is well! xx
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Lovely and romantic poetry to reflect
the evermore love spellbound
for all tomorrows.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Speaks to me of joyful, anticipated love.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Christine, this is absolutely beautifully written poetry so deep from the heart and soul truly an enchanting write Laura
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|This is lovely Christine for truly I prefer to write romanticism as opposed to others things. I am a very romantic soul... this was a beautiful vision
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
wonderful visions of a loving partnership.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|I just love that phrase "inhale me." I wrote a poem not too long ago called "I Inhale, You Exhale."
Loved this poem. The ending was unique . . .
"whispers of gossip heard in the wind,
our novel buried, written on a whim"
Your poem brightened up my day.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Such a beautiful Heart you have *Christine*
with Love so right for fulfillment....
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It is so easy to relate to what you express through your verses, Christine. They are pristine and feel like I could have written them to express what I feel. Thank you for sharing your gift/s. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Perfectly penned Chrissie...such an invitation is hard to ignore when someone loves you enough to hear the words and the gift of love within. We can't always see what we have until we no longer have it. Can an ending birth a new beginning?