The Manatee's Grass
by Jane Noponen Perinacci
Sunday, July 08, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Inspired responce to Steven Curtis Lance's poem, "Because He Was a Manatee".
This is a little something for Steven Curtis Lance to make him think twice before he smokes another mantee's grass! Shame on you Steven Curtis Lance, Poe's 8th C.. (LOL)
A manatee once came to me
Within a dream one night
She cried the blues for she did lose
Her stash this was her plight
She said a man who had a plan
Spoke poetry one day
With every word she swooned and heard
Of dugong's seaward play
She was perplexed for what come next
The poet had her stash
Just smiled did she for she loved he
Who told of dugong's cache
Dream ending well manatee fell
For dugong's long dugong
They hide their grass from poet's ass
Laughing day's dugong long
Jane Noponen Perinacci
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love the flow (rhyme and rhythm) as well as the humor of this piece, Jane. Well done! Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I love all of you guys out there! I'm so busy reading everyone's stuff................ give me a little time, please?|
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|LOLOLOL, Unique humour.|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Laughing all day long. How long did you say that bong?
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Wasn't me, I ain't got his stash...I have trouble enough keeping my own let alone stealing someone else's...e|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Oh Jane, this is priceless! How well done in jest for this fellow and I love the picture! Obviously he is counted a wonderful friend :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by +Steven Curtis Lance
|Well, I never say anything in this box here, but, I just had to say thank you, and that I really appreciate you, Jane; thank you for being my friend in spite of what the Den-izens might have told you; thanks and love, stay cool (I know you will), and I'll see you on Facebook. <(")|