|Reviewed by jude forese
|powerful emotions flow through this poem, Roger ...|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|A well presented write of Felicity's desires,
a victory is in the wind for she is laying
out the line to Todd.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|I love the pace and sheer exuberism of this tightly-crafted piece, Roger, which goes to demonstrate and prove the rapaciousness of Felicity's ardour so well. Seems that Todd has no choice but to be consumed in this inferno whether he likes it or not. Is it love or victory Felicity is after?
Spurn my every advance with a firm ‘no!’
so that my mystery remains unsolved,
and I relentlessly burn underground,
until your scorched earth yields victory spoils,
and fleshed-out pound for ever-loving pound
of love bear witness to our rough-edged trials.
... She's certainly a handful if this is how she displays her devotion rather than her "spurned fury"! :)) xx
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|The reflective heat of this piece offers energy to the passions of imagination; enigmatic as such may seem from time to time. Such a force offers much salve for the scars, both real, and in vision's patient construction. As usual, your chosen words/"Facts" stimulate and provide.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|IT IS OBVIOUS THAT HE AND FELICITY DESERVE ONE ANOTHER...THEIR TWO OF A KIND. SO SHE NEEDS TO HOLD HIM CLOSE AND TIGHT AS SHE CONTINUES TO SATURATE HIM WITH PASSIONATE WORDS OF LOVE AND DESIRE SO HE CAN KEEP HIS MIND OFF OF CYNTHIA AND LEAVE HER ALONE. THANKS FOR THE SHARE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Powerful emotions here. Enjoyed, Roger. Just recently I downloaded an MP3 of John Donnes 'Holy Sonnets'. If you haven't heard or read them, I would highly recommend the series. Really moving work. Several of them mysteriously brought tears. Hoping all is well ... richard|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Sizzling heat *Roger*
you have written....
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|This is superb! Another engaging sequel to all your other Felicity installments...You must write a book this is awesome!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very well done, Roger.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Can't say it any stronger and honest that this, Roger. Felicity is bursting at the seams . ..|