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Repondez s il vous plait
by Vivian L Dawson

Monday, July 09, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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By invitation only
harmony and rhythm
rendering of my heart
beat shared barefoot
upon a beach relating
"I Love You"

Nothing ventured
nothing gained for
two when love sings
in a buoyant sea of
I love you's

Ripple out my bottle
I cast for You...please
RSVP...indulge my
fantasy, come back little
Sheba and be mine

(c) Repondez s il vous plait
Vivian L Dawson







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Reviewed by Amor Sabor 8/18/2012
Just as we cast our pleas across "le Mer" we have duplicated this same when we search out a suitable star under the endless canopy of a beautiful night sky.
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 8/5/2012
I imagine the chances of a message in a bottle getting a response from the intended recipient are pretty remote but what a romantic idea. It is said that this type of message has been around for two thousand years; a tribute to the enduring fascination with the idea. Your little poem does justice to this eternal theme.
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 7/11/2012
Sweet love rendered by the sea. A loving piece Lady Vivian.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 7/10/2012
simply romance at its best written
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 7/10/2012
Reviewed by D. Vegas 7/10/2012
Beautifully romantic, 2 lovers that were once 1.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 7/10/2012
"...come back little/Sheba and be mine" That is deliciously playful! ~~ DIana
Reviewed by Laura Fall 7/10/2012
Lovely poetry indeed Laura
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 7/10/2012
Place within the bottle the notes of love and cast it out to sea, for at unexpected moments he returns to thee...

What a lovely vision of once was and it awaits for the return thereof

Love and Light
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/10/2012
Mysterious lines that hint at lost loves and longing...well done.
Reviewed by neerja gandhi 7/9/2012
:)beautiful...MSG does wishes
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 7/9/2012
It's always a good thing when someone reciprocates our feelings and desires. I love the message in the bottle idea that Jerry put in his review.

Lovely work as always, Miss Vivian

Peace, love and light,
Reviewed by william goldman (Reader) 7/9/2012
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 7/9/2012
Aww, message plain and clear in a bottle for the lover expectant. Yes, yes, answer the plea, do it quickly.

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