|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Just as we cast our pleas across "le Mer" we have duplicated this same when we search out a suitable star under the endless canopy of a beautiful night sky.|
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|I imagine the chances of a message in a bottle getting a response from the intended recipient are pretty remote but what a romantic idea. It is said that this type of message has been around for two thousand years; a tribute to the enduring fascination with the idea. Your little poem does justice to this eternal theme.|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Sweet love rendered by the sea. A loving piece Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
simply romance at its best written
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Beautifully romantic, 2 lovers that were once 1.
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|"...come back little/Sheba and be mine" That is deliciously playful! ~~ DIana|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Lovely poetry indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Place within the bottle the notes of love and cast it out to sea, for at unexpected moments he returns to thee...
What a lovely vision of once was and it awaits for the return thereof
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Mysterious lines that hint at lost loves and longing...well done.
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|:)beautiful...MSG does reaches....best wishes|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|It's always a good thing when someone reciprocates our feelings and desires. I love the message in the bottle idea that Jerry put in his review.
Lovely work as always, Miss Vivian
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
|LOVELY, WONDER WHO YOU WERE THING OF ??? LOLHG|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Aww, message plain and clear in a bottle for the lover expectant. Yes, yes, answer the plea, do it quickly.|