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  Chasing An Attribute
by George Carroll
Tuesday, July 10, 2012
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Thoughts that bug you


Chasing an attribute
That lingered in my mind.

Only to catch it
Entwined in my thoughts.

Listing like a ship,
It weighed that heavy

On a mind barely able
To right its state of being.

Yet subliminal flashes
Eased my pondering.

And balanced a laden thought,
That could undo me.




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Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 11/29/2012
Yes, I think I know what you mean. It's that thought that's like a butterfly on the edge of a flower which is only there for a moment, but then, it's gone.

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/13/2012
Thought-provoking words that elicit reflection; thank you, George. Love and blessings,

Regis
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 7/10/2012
yes, listing, thoughts can do that. Nice write. ~ Morgan
Reviewed by JMS Bell 7/10/2012
LITTLE BY LITTLE...CHANGE DOES COME. WE CAN HARDLY GET AWAY FROM IT. THANKS FOR SHARING. ENJOYED, GEORGE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/10/2012
I can truly relate to this, and found it worth saving to read again George.
fee
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/10/2012
Interesting thoughts :-)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 7/10/2012
Sometimes we are guilty of out-thinking ourselves, George, at least I know I have had those embarrassing moments often in my life.
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