|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|What a beautiful dream
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite lovely, as is the rhyming here.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|A real midsummers night dream.|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|So delicate with the tender hues of the night etched throughout...Sheer bliss to read! Diana...|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A wonderful wandering through the wonders of the night as you wish your loved one to sleep tight. And reward him or her with sweet nectar upon the wake. I can taste it now… ;-)
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|You sure know how to write! I look forward every day to see what's next! We love it! Keep writing Lilly
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|I truly felt the wonderment of
your dreaming *Carolee* living
is to love...and be loved....
|Reviewed by Shirley Houston
|Magnificent!!! "Slumber my dear fellow, now bathed in soft moonlight...." What a picturesque rendering!!|
|Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
|What a beautiful romantic dream Lily! Whoever this man is you must really love him!
|Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)
|What a beautiful romantic dream Lily, one I hope my late husband always feels from me. You pour so much love into everything you write.
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|"Lovely hues paint ebbing light/Upon horizon's sleeve" what a vision! "Aurora from the sun" good imagery in this. . .~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
|Tenderness and beauty permeates with each romantic line...
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|Dear Lady Lily, again your wondrous romantic imagination has touched the hearts of many here as it touches me. You write with such beauty in words and with love. To be this man and to receive such blessings to his life should be something he carries where ever he goes.
I bow and tip my hat to you
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Carol, I can see past the dream sequence...favorite lines-
"As though we ebb together" Taste the drops of honey I placed
upon your tongue" and definitely the last four stanzas. Very
romantic, alluring even haunting. Enjoyed as always, thank you!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Hey send some of those nice dreams my way, will ya? Mine are usually just plain weird...;-) e|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Well done indeed and smoothly offered for the readers.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|A dream sequence to beat all dream sequence's, Carol. A smile his face will surely cross when when he awakens to the sweetness of a beautiful dream and the taste of you upon his lips.|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Whom ever he may be he is a lucky man to have you wish him such romantic lovey dreams. superb, bravo.
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|I can taste the sweetness of the honey drops on my tongue, I can feel the sweetness in my heart. The tenderness and love as they caress my soul.
Beautiful words and highly romantic Carolee
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Ooooooo! So pretty!
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|You combine beauty and desire like no other person. Eloquence, grace, syle beauty and love mix perfectly in this stirring poem. To quote a friend, "thought creates form" I know who I am thinking of.
Stay well and keep writing