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Love
by D. L. Vegas
Thursday, July 12, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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She gave to him
A lock of her hair

He gave to her
The key to his heart

She took the key
Gave him her love

He undressed her love
Giving her his kisses

She proclaimed to be true
All he wanted was what he received...

Love?

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Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 7/14/2012
"Love?" meaning so many different
things to each one *Deborah* who
is to say if it works or not
between two...but your poem sure
sounded like it did for them

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/14/2012
You hit the nail on the head! I'm really surprised still have the title, “ Love,” available. I keep discovering that I'm using the same title over again and have to change the second one. Since it begs the question, perhaps the title should be, “Love?”

Ron
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 7/14/2012
my husband gave a girl his comb when he was in 2nd grade
ain't that too cute? lol
Love is so marvelous
from the 1st love-which is nice
but being last is the very best! :)

Love's Innate Hour Glass
Vickie

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 7/13/2012
Hmmm! Was it love?

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 7/13/2012
You have placed a great deal of 'happening' into these few lines. The effect is complete revelation. Scrolling down to read your text, the first thing I see is the image of a precious braid, so cared for with ribbon, so shockingly truncated. Then, entering your poem, the words immediately interlaced into the painting and the lines read like a beautiful romance clear to the last provocative line, which bookended the experience of seeing the sliced, sacrificed braid. Artistic flare of line placement made this a fabulous poem to me; and it was enhanced with your last word "Love?" Marvelous writing! ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 7/13/2012
No, something is very lacking here for Love is so much more.

Good food for thought

Love and Light
Lily



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