|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Holy Shit!!! Run..........giggle....reads like the excerpt of a really good book!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Love gone so awry as only you
can do so very well *Jerry* You
had me rooting for your escape
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Reads like it really happened. You have a way of making it real. And I love it!
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Shame on her!! She used her "ways" not to a good cause! You never needed anything like this! Your Momma loved you and didn't want anyone not to!! God bless your momma!!
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
I hope this is from that wide and exceptional imagination of yours. This is as well penned as i always know yours will be.
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|So goes the many wrong choices we all make. Better luck is a comin'.|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|So descriptive, yet it leaves so much for the mind to bargain with.
Very nice. Dick
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Memories certianly can save you from such a fate.....good write.|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|Great detailed storytelling piece. You have just the right amount of lascivious shock comingled with good sensation-textured atmosphere. I'm looking forward to reading your novel, Jerry. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|get her on her knees, tie her hands behind her & you won't have to worry bout that knife...though she could still bite...e|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|"What could I have been thinking?" Hmm I've echoed that to myself often! And won't go into the bloody details ha ha ha
I can just see you here Jerry, well almost everything!
And to me this sounds like lines from a novel or old
movie, perhaps the notorious detective or the sort
almost Bogie and Bacall, their rocky relationship.
Smiling great morning mind thoughts!
Fantastic as always
Love and Light
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|ouch! in that moment of ration of passion
we are often rash...and oh that coup de foudre
ah the ole rush of blood to the... head,
i was going to say
strong stuff, Jerry, and a joy
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|I always wonder if you write out of your very rich life experiences or imaginary.
You write so very vivid that I can see you walk away in the rain. I even see your thoughts.