|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Inherent choices between sex and
love making made along life's way
...worlds apart making decisions...
*Jerry* Thanks for opening up the
subject for discussion...in a way
You do so very well....
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I love the way you describe the humidity! Oh! And catchin' a glimpse in that yellowed mirror!!! I love it!
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|well a lot have already said much my friend, i never cared for just sex myself but do see the value it seems to have for others. I prefer knowing a woman first, then if both wish to take that step it should be lingering, thoughtful of the other person more than yourself, loving so to say, thats why we call it making love isn't it but then that is just me and we all know i am just an old romantic fool. Budd|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|You have distilled the essence of a hot, humid afternoon with the thought of a poem lingering on your mind to be written. So rich and realistic, I felt like I was there with you.
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Twists and turns of the ever perplexing question; sex or love, mind or flesh. It will always remain the two headed monster some make it as well as the quiet conundrum you've posted for the rest of us.|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A meaningful and great write Jerry ,Laura
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|A sharing of reflection often brings us to new understandings. Its weeks,perhaps months later we understand what it is that we have learnt.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|A very thoughtful day you had on June 14th...Saturdays are good days to sit back and think...e|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|this one made for me a great way to open monday morning. i suppose you may have helped me last night, unbeknowst to you, overcome my dilema of not enough time to read/comment AND write.....so i just decided to do part of it here (or even ALL of it)... on government time.
Now that wouldn't make me a thiefy kind of person...would it? i'm still cloudy aboout the difference between 'entitlement' and thievery....guess thats niether here nor there....this was a delightful piece jerry, in every way...pat
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|a fantastic contemplation Jerry, although I do not agree with everything.
Sex is only short term satisfaction while making love (as Lily said already in a loving relation)is a much deeper and a remaining satisfaction.
Actually (without going into details), I have beautiful remembrances about the humidity and sticky 14th of June.
Very good write Jerry
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Darn, I was really absorbed! And of course now laughing!
But for most I think the mere history of the aforementioned (lol)
is something thought upon by many whether conquered or just enjoyed as a nice memory (unless it's the first time disaster lol) But sex is sex, short term and not fulfilling (my opinion), I would rather make love in a loving relationship even if that relationship fails and have a fulfilled memory as opposed to Jack Rabbit and run lol!
Now, let me add going way back... on a mid-June awful humid sticky day... Not only do I look frightening the cats skedaddle!
Great prose Jerry AGAIN and it left me with a great smile!
Love and Light