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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/18/2012 |
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just beyond reach, and yet...
how we play tricks on ourselves
but then why not?
well delivered, Jerry,
john |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
7/18/2012 |
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grabbing on to an illusion can be tricky no promise of a return trip. perfect picture jerry...can't tell though what she's holding in her left hand...a non-floating illusion perhaps?
i love the trip this one took me on...for it did just that...pat |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/17/2012 |
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i am not compitent enough to put into words how well thought out and penned this write is.
budd |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/17/2012 |
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Keeping one's head above the water
if you can swim, even floating when
tired...an illusion can take you there
Lady Vivian
Smiling *Jerry* through this one |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/17/2012 |
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| Freshness in this one! ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/17/2012 |
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Sounds like what a good “hit” does to you. Pick your poison.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/17/2012 |
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| our most gripping illusions are those that aren't there ... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/17/2012 |
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| But people like complication's don't they?......ah a moment with the moon very refreshing :-) |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
7/17/2012 |
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I think I need help, Jerry. I haven't been able to get my illusions to float, yet there have been times when I felt the urge to howl. Maybe there is still hope.
Enjoyed, Dick |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/17/2012 |
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| Next time I run into one, I will grab onto to it...e |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/17/2012 |
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| Allowing the reader to create his own image makes this poem particular. Thank you. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/17/2012 |
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I just bet it would cause me to smile widely! Bring it on!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/16/2012 |
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You watching Dark Shadows too? (1967 version)
Wow, now that is a night time tonic! I prefer tea myself, but will you share? :)
How unique and interesting Jerry... you just took me into the Netherworld of the unknown.. I like it :)
Love and Light
Lily |
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