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query into leaving
by jude forese
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How you going to go, Pam

How you going to go?

 

Where you going to leave, Steve

In rain or sleet nor snow?

 

How you going to feel, Gil

When the light shoots from your eyes?

 

When are you going to sleep, Pete

To find it’s time to rise?!

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Jon Willey
jude, a posit? - for the assumption is that we in fact, are - interesting for the fascination of the next, the final state - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Your wit is right-on Jude.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by richard cederberg
An interesting query, Robert, with a fine 'tongue in cheek' spirit
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
I was enjoying this until I read below that Matlack wants a job in the nude!
Reviewed by John Flanagan
luv it, Jude! witty and sharp

anyone comin back, Jack?
(to tell us how it is on the other side)

john
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
...just drop off the key, Lee... and get yourself free... no need to be coy, Roy... hop on the bus, Gus, don't need to discuss much... yeah... 50 ways to leave your Lover... Rhymin' Simon... this little ditty is fit Forese...
Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
Kind of made me wonder if its just random names or people you know ... Since you started this, the first song that came to mind was, hit the road Jack and dont you come back, no more no more no more no more. That will be stuck in my head today ... ;) lol
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Feelings for one and all..
Lady Vivian

*jude* clever are the questions
Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
A nice sing-songy pattern.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Very playful :-)
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
... in de nude, Jude; boy, Eddie M sure has you sussed, Babe! Munching on a melon, Helen; with a mate, Kate... and kinda late: Man, this really works! LOL!! And it's never too late to rise, Guys, and that ain't lies. And I'm hopin prior to Kingdom Come, rather than after... or at least as well as. Thanks, this is just what the doctor ordered for me today, Bugs. xx
Reviewed by pat medlin
keep going jude...this is an intersting write...just didn't last long enough
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Well Jude,
This surely is quite a unique write. I find myself singing the song from our teens, 50 ways to leave your lover...but somehow I believe this is more about how one will be leaving this Earth for better places...Obsession with the unevitable is quite enlightening.
Just check out your back, Jack, make no plan, Stan, live for today, May, love for ever, Trevor, kiss my nose, Rose, take out the trash, Stash, wow, I guess you can go on and on and on with this...lol

Another mind bender from the Shaman....

Much peace, light, and love,
Amber
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Acoustics are good in hell...rhymes reverberate...ashes pave the way with a one-way ticket let those jealous poets stew while me an' you have a brew dark lager ale and peek at the titties on the Hooters widget!

Love & Bronx globes,
Sage
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Simple verses, but its power is in its very simplicity. There's a sense of poignancy...,.

Chip Bergeron
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
Kind of reminds me of the Paul Simon song, 50 Ways To Leave Your Lover. Interesting offering, Jude, it feels like a prologue to something more.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Gonna go away far, Bob,
Till I find me a job.

Gonna enjoy to travel, Jude,
Want a job in the nude,
Don't want to though, to you appear rude...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
I was ready for ten more of those, kinda getting in tha groove, don'tja'no. I can tell you how Gil is going to feel, like he has finally found God and God spit in his eye.
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