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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/19/2012 |
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"midnight magic" is adored by much too many and denies the soul of its freedom, a tragic situation ...
powerfully gripping poem, Jerry ... |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/19/2012 |
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So tragic....don't know anything at all about drugs, but my heart goes out to those in the strangling grip of addiction! Deeply moving write, my friend.
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/18/2012 |
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| Why have I not been made aware of this poem?? This is so real. I never did a needle but I gave my soul........................ |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/18/2012 |
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this is strong and very moving, Jerry;
horse - one of the great curses.
fine writing
john |
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| Reviewed by Keith Rowley |
7/18/2012 |
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| Very powerful. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/18/2012 |
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I was expecting an adoring poem, only to find that it's about an angel that saves an addict.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/18/2012 |
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Depths of sadness, my friend
*Jerry* of which you write..
that I feel...
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/18/2012 |
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So many look for happiness in drugs, does not matter which one legal or illegal, they all take their toll. They ruin lives, break hearts, until the poor soul finally is destroyed.
Very compelling heart-wrenching write Jerry
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/18/2012 |
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Oh my Jerry, this is a deep moving write Laura
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/18/2012 |
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| Being a cashier I see this death walking through our doors a lot ........and all you can do is shake your head and hope you never fall into this trap. |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/18/2012 |
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| Adored as double entendre as well as metaphor catapults these thoughts beyond the effect of their presence on the page. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/18/2012 |
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Fascinating poetry...Heroin, scary stuff! Amazing poetry, well written and engaging.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/18/2012 |
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any of these drugs kill the person that was, i am truly saddened by their loss to you.
budd |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/18/2012 |
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| Never have I ever used a needle drug, personally...my deepest condolances to you for that person...no one deserves to get hung up on any drug that powerful...the monster that did that deserved to die, slowly...e |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
7/18/2012 |
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| yes as george said...the scourge of our world...robbing every one of us linked to an 'adored' of hope for anything more than the 'freedom' that comes usually only at the end. you tell of it so well...pat |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
7/18/2012 |
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If I combine this with your story "A Fairie Tale", I can feel your heart pain Jerry, this touches me deep.
Heroin as well as cocaine are real "grinning soul-stealing destroyers"
Thanks for sharing this with us Jerry |
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