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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/20/2012 |
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So compassionate is your poem
*Jerry* I admire your heart!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Keith Rowley |
7/19/2012 |
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| I love this - I think you know why! You capture much with a few well chosen words and create the entire contextual background as the lines play out. Thanks for this. |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
7/19/2012 |
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Well expressed...sad
Good wishes...neerja |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/19/2012 |
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| This is too sad, I could feel her sadness from the start...very good, Jerry...e |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/19/2012 |
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| compassion and communication should be are foremost goals ... keep up the conversation ... |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/19/2012 |
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| you have so well penned the words perfectly that all should live by but unfortunately don't. you have the heart and soul of one we should all heed.budd |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
7/19/2012 |
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I love that you are so comfortable going against the grain. I can just hear you saying, "faux pas my ass, I make my own rules."
Nicely done. Dick
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| Reviewed by T Jett |
7/19/2012 |
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| Your compassion speak volumes, Jerry. Deeply moving write! |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
7/19/2012 |
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| each line of this palpitates with emotion...quieting each heart reading it, to stop and recall missed opportunities to look into eyes and recognize the 'need' in them and act with compassion. so nice jerry. |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/19/2012 |
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| The world is enhanced by your 'frequency-holding' power in the form of these written gifts of yours: "like a stain of her own undoing" - "she measured the faces of those around her" - "and in them I saw such a great need". To read insightfulness such as this makes just that many more of us mindful of sightfulness. Thank you. Respectfully, ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/19/2012 |
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| And so it goes, most of society living the paper doll existence, while a few still understand we are a sentient, organic piece of life. |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/19/2012 |
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Truly a touching write Laura
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/19/2012 |
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An exploration of the affects of our economic society. A great job as always.
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/19/2012 |
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Compassion is such a beautiful thing Jerry, I know you have a compassionate heart. For at one time or another we have all had our wants and needs only wishing for a kind soul to give us a moment of their time. And of course caring not what others may think. This is true love and compassion written beautifully as you observe what this poor soul has gone through. Observation, understanding, for those in need.
Just wonderful again, as always you pen everything so well and in depth of meaning.
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/19/2012 |
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Bless the homeless.....they don't choose to live this way.....I NEVER pass a person who's down and out and reaching out their hand for help....Beautifully penned, Jerry....YOu sooooo captured her essence...
Anna |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
7/19/2012 |
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Excellent Jerry! ENJOYED
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
7/19/2012 |
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What a great observation as if watching a movie in slow motion, revealing every single detail.
Societal "faux pas" or not, of course you have to converse with her.
Sublime again Jerry |
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