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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/21/2012 |
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| We sometimes forget how much comfort and acceptance nature provides. Instead, we try so desperately to find it with the opposite sex... and the same sex, only to find rejection more the norm than the sultry moisture that nourishes the cypress. When will man wake up and release his bridled confinement to societal identity alone. There's many a gnarled and weathered existence out there willing to just...BE for our growth and pleasure. This may not be your purpose, but August heat effects readers too... even in July. What's that saying: anticipation is greater than reality. |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/21/2012 |
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Sensuality so inviting *Jerry*
with allurement from the mystic
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/21/2012 |
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Jerry this is an Excellent poem Laura
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/20/2012 |
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What a beautiful picture you have painted here! I've always loved to listen to people from southern Lousiana talk! Sometimes I don't even understand them but the sounds are so lovely
Love ya!
Jane
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/20/2012 |
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What an absolutely beautiful vision Jerry, something so lovely...sensual and alluring... magical
Very lovely
Love and Light
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/20/2012 |
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Louisiana is a perfect place to find a goddess, you give us a heated dream.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/20/2012 |
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You have recalled, recreated, and shared the experience (and ambiance) very effectively via your verses, Jerry. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/20/2012 |
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On a hot, sultry day, it doesn't get any better than this.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by T Jett |
7/20/2012 |
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| beautiful, soft and sensual poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/20/2012 |
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You conjure up fantastic imagery here, Jerry.....I can feel the Bayou heat........Nicely done!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
7/20/2012 |
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Can't find the damn off button for my imagination. You went and got it all revvvved up and I just can't figure out how to get it turned back off.
Thanks Jerry, much enjoyed. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/20/2012 |
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| Glad you clarified that word, as all I could think was that the goddess was a lesbian and like the singer Cher...;-) e |
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| Reviewed by Shirley Houston |
7/20/2012 |
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| This is so awesome!!! Makes me miss my birth State...soft, sensuous & inviting |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/20/2012 |
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deliciously sensual, Jerry,
and no need to say more;
like the pith and thrust of this
john |
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