|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|That phrase "Take the plunge" is expressed eloquently in this personal little piece. They say the best writing comes from the writers who have the courage to bear their souls, your imagery here is vivid and personal. Good work.|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Beautifully free in spirit and color illusions.
This is a 'Wow' Lady Vivian
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|VIVIAN, A BEAUTIFUL AND POWERFUL PIECE OF WORK...JUMP IN AND BE FREE...KEEP UP THE BEAUTIFUL WORK. ANNA|
|Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
|and let me go toooooooooooooooooooooo!!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Compellingly enticing thoughts and suggestions, Vivian. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A fascinating write Laura
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Go on, Vivian, jump!
and delight in the moment, the sheer sense of it;
as others have said, a side of you not revealed
before and as Ron wisely says, 'a little bit at a time'
keeps us hanging (even salivating) for more.
A joy of a write.
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Oh just do it! I used to swim at night at Seal Beach eons ago :) A wonderful feeling it is. Of course I was much braver then. Nothing more lovely than feeling free :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|great imagery Vivian a long cool skinny dip sure feels good
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Wow this is coming from a place that I had not heard from you before. Stunningly beautiful in a haunting way.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|You are revealing a lot. Then again, there is something sensuous about revealing little bit at a time. There comes a time when you just have to jump, naked or not!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Quite unlike anything I recall reading from your pen. Although we all have our dark, you have been very proficient in camouflaging yours. Now it peeks its head out from the corner of your heart. Taking that swim can be tantamount to washing the dark away.|