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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
7/29/2012 |
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| heart dreams in color. |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/27/2012 |
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Dreaming is good on all accounts
*Jerry* and found your poem very
interesting and creative....
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/27/2012 |
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Dreams are a beautiful thing Jerry, whether we are sleeping or awake. In our sleeping dreams they are events we have gone through thought of and experienced sometimes we can control that. Waking dreams are our desires and expression to have something beautiful in our lives. So yes those are the ones you want to count.
A beautiful expression written her my very good friend
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/26/2012 |
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my friend i am not sure we want any of my dreams to come to fruition.
budd |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/26/2012 |
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| Excellent poetry Laura |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/26/2012 |
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| I like that you distinquish between two kinds of dream states. I think the dreams in the night count more heavily than the dreams in the day; as they may be narcissistic, but they are the absolute uncensored subconscious (albeit we'd most often surely NOT want to make THOSE come true!) I gravitate to any writings that are about dreams. Do some more, okay? ~ ~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/26/2012 |
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Right on!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
7/26/2012 |
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Jerry ~ Beautiful dreams of the heart
come true to be ever blessed.
Excellent writing.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/26/2012 |
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| And then, of course, there are some of us who dream at night to awaken with recharged energy, knowing the work while sleeping gave resolve to issues otherwise standing in the way of the daytime dream potential. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/26/2012 |
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| Ah yes, I dream of someday making my dreams come true...e |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
7/26/2012 |
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I do a lot of daydreaming. Does that count?
Lots of truth in this one Jerry. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/26/2012 |
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When you're right, you're right....this is spot on, Jerry! Beautifully penned!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
7/26/2012 |
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This is beautiful Jerry and so very true.
We all have our daily dreams, big and small and as long as we have these dreams we strive to make them come true.
All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.
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