|Reviewed by Ed J.
|One of natures most beautiful and delicate creations. wonderfully writen.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|I think it was Nietzsche who said, "We should try to stay as close to the flowers, the grass, and the butterflies as a child is who is no bigger than they are." This little gem seems to show that the writer has managed to retain that sense of wonder.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Everytime I see a butterfly it inspires me to think of freedom. Beautifully penned, Vivian.|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|Beautiful.... And ummm...for what Carol says, amazing ! Liked it, best wishes, neerja|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Butterflies are beautiful little souls Vivian :) They also touch you when you think of a loved one who has crossed over to the other side when you are missing them.
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your words are thought-inciting, Vivian. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Shades of magenta brilliance.
The heart of a butterfly's movement
in freedom. Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Oh my such breathtaking poetry. You know how to move me
Much peace love and light
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Beautifully written Laura|
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|And Vivian, butterflies are fasinating, like the many miles they fly every year...Enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|nice flight Viv! enjoyed the ride :)|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|Intriguing title, alluding to perfect sight, which zooms in for the closeness of dew drops, the lift of 'heightened shades of magenta' to the fall into consciousness. This read for me like a swish of language that was delicate and dimensional. Very much enjoyed this reading experience, Vivian. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Love to see them fly while walking in the wood,
just keep them away from the road as on a car hood,
they don't look anymore good...
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|O, that the butterfly could take us there… ascending to the mountain top!
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|...ah yes, life is but a passing stage... as this deft delivery from form informs... we await delivery from this consciousness... into what will yet be revealed... perfect metaphor her, perfectly expressed...|
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|VIVIAN, ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY OF MY FAVORITE THE BUTTERLY. EVERY WORD..WRITTEN WITH DEPTH AND BEAUTY. ANNA|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|Vivian this was a magnificent vision penned perfectly
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Took us for a magnificent ride-a-long with the stunning butterfly, giving us a wonderful flight of absolute fancy and magic. Yesss!!|