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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/6/2012 |
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| I've heard the term but now see the beauty of this triolet form, Richard, breathed in both words and sentiment. Such a perfect style for your message and I love the metre and rhythm which sets up such a strong sense of ascent and conquering. This is indeed a pillar of a poem in the Temple of God. Great work, thank you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
8/5/2012 |
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...a resonant reverie of spirituality... formally, how like a villanelle, contextually your content is potent as a rising swell... and an ending that takes us well beyond who can tell... sweet verses indeed.
Roger |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
8/4/2012 |
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An eagle stretches it's wings to the sky
It's there where the beauty lies
Through the canyons on high
Echoes a windy cry.
Once clearly seen by the eye
The beholder can not deny
Speechless, the lips remain dry.
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
8/2/2012 |
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| Damn, will wonders never cease, I understand and agree with this one...guess I have to get a buzz to read ur stuff from now on...;-)e |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
8/2/2012 |
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| Wow this reads so nicely and is beautiful. When you can truly relax in nature, it does have that ability to humble you and inspire. I think you are fortunate to live near some breathtaking scenery. Awesome r. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
8/2/2012 |
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This poem is such an inspiration for me, not only the subject matter but the form, structure, and most of all the artistry and spirituality! Bravo Richard!
Blessings,
Christine |
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