|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Fortunate am I to know you so I can get the "inside scoop" on this thought-incitiong poem of yours. Maybe it is because I am tired but I am a bit "lost." You grasped my attention and made me think, though. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|There might be one inescapable word that grabs everyone's attention only the people will know what that word is.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|An island we are not
and One's actions
affect All, but the
ultimate is God's
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|I too think the word is God!
|Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)
|I like a riddle, but not only a riddle you gave me a lot of visuals here to this old mind. I know the word, its God. Everyone wants to know about God.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|There ain't no pain in the fall...its that sudden stop...;-) e|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Oh! How you do go on!! Lovely!
|Reviewed by Keith Rowley
|Crafted with artifice and elegance my dear Lily!|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|wonderful just simply wonderfully written drawing readers in to ponder the question..bravo
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|I concur with Gail, it could be a number of words and there are so many. Ok Lilly, will you give us all the word in the end? :)
|Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
|One word could be many things, money, wealth, God, death. I believe all those words would get attention.
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|And the lady Lily gives us a riddle, to figure out the word that captured so many's attention. You amaze me with your ability to give such diversity in your writing.
I bow and tip my hat to you
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Excellent drama within the borders of this well-written and, as I said, dramatic poem, Carol. I don't need to know the end result to understand what can deepen fear into the hearts of mankind; it is enough to look into the eyes. I would never yell "jump," although as I stood and watched I might think to myself, you have come this far, but take yet another five minutes to completely clear your mind that this is the correct course of action for you.|
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|Just like the crowd, now we want to know the answer as well
You've made us part of the flabbergasted crowd.
as if we stand in the middle of them, looking around to each other to find the answer
Brilliant Carolee, you've totally drawn us into it.
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|The crowd doesn't seem to much help at this point to the poor soul but a thoughtful piece. Perhaps they would interpret the onlookers that way and perhaps those below want to see that, excitement or something. Thought inspiring piece.
stay well and keep writing