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Upon Awakening
by Vivian L Dawson

Tuesday, August 07, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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It's not fair! I woke up this morning
and instantly thought about work,
chores and the backlog of things
I've left undone this week.

Did you know that on your
birthday the Sun returns to the
exact position in the sky as it was
the day you were born? This is
called a Solar Return

So, I'm supposed to gaze and
wonder leaving all that stuff
behind  me today and just relax 
having fun....what's my problem?

I know...I need friends and
colleagues to help me celebrate
freeing my child within..Will you
join me and free Yours too?


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Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen 8/12/2012
Also as "old" or "young" as you are is as many times that you have traveled around the sun. A fun piece to read John. a pleasure.

Oh yes, deal me in.

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 8/9/2012
I'm in!!!!
Reviewed by Laura Fall 8/9/2012
Truly a Sweet poem Laura
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/9/2012
The kid in me is always trying to bust out, but my nasty wife often quickly shoos him right back inside and tells me to get to work!
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/8/2012
yes, Vivian, let's free our children together -
wouldn't that be something!
enjoyed your dry humour and keen observation here
and that meaningful philosophical bent you have

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 8/8/2012
Never knew that thing about the sun, nice to know. I work with kids and can't help noticing how much more they laugh than adults, how come we lose that great gift of happiness so easily. Maybe the inner child needs to get out more. Made me think.
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE 8/7/2012
...another day, another 365 gone by... Can,t see the sun for all the clouds and thunder and rain here, but my thoughts and prayers are with you. I thought this was a unique as a birthday poem as I have ever read...
Reviewed by william goldman (Reader) 8/7/2012
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 8/7/2012
Very lovely poetry, Another fine job my dear.

Much peace, love and light,
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 8/7/2012
our child within is always ready to come out and play..happy solar return
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) 8/7/2012
hi vivian, another lovely poem..i am most certainly giving you permission to free your child within...after all she needs to celebrate and have fun...hug your way, anna
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 8/7/2012
We should always look to the child within us, it is the carefree part of our soul. Happy birthday Vivian Dawson :) Celebrate the wonderful person you are! Chores will wait lol

Love and Light
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 8/7/2012
Lady Vivian ~
The child within me will be happy to join you today.
A special day to celebrate.. "Happy Birthday" Lady Vivian.
May the sun be in-line with you always.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 8/7/2012
My child within turned out to be an evil imp, Vivian, so maybe you'd better not invite him. Hahah

Didn't know that about the sun, some more word power to fall back on when the conversation begins to lag.

Have fun with the child within party, I'm looking on, my grumpy old guy within won't let me attend.

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