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| Reviewed by Teresa Walker |
8/10/2012 |
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Very nice ...first love is why we seek more of it. It is like a drug wanting the next fix...
Hearts captivated right..
Thanks for sharing
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
8/9/2012 |
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Tender *Deborah*
and Sweet....
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
8/8/2012 |
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Ah, yes! That first love!
Love ya!
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| Reviewed by Asa Seeley |
8/7/2012 |
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i agree with budd...whether good or bad, we never forget first love.
thanks
asa |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
8/7/2012 |
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our first love is one we never forget
budd |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/7/2012 |
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My first true love was my ex husband, he is now an ex, but when I think back to our younger years (I was 15 he was 16) Ir was just like in that movie Endless Love from the 70's Wow tender memories kept deeply saved within my mind and heart...You have a way of touching your readers with the simplicity and rawness of your poetry...
Nicely done..
Much peace love and light,
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
8/7/2012 |
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Ahh I think we have all had those. I was madly in love with my photography teachers son. He didn't know I existed, but I just adored him. I was in the 10th grade lol... but none-the-less he was such a nice boy. A gentleman of a young man, sweet and kind, well-mannered. I think about him now and then. His name was Wayne
Lovely write Deborah, you touch topics that bring back memories for all of us :)
Love and Light
Lily |
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