|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|So much Love to Give
*Jerry* and so lovely
to read with a guiding
light of serenity....
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Sweets in every fold of a precious rose.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|passionate and descriptive.|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|Fiery piece that crackles with atmosphere. "my eyes burn with desire" flamable wording. I found enigmatic affinity for "ours is an off-troubled facade" and "in transparent folds and tucks/of her apparent" (which may have been meant to be 'apparel', but 'apparent' is curiously capturing and I therefore really like it.) The words "grizzled cheeks" has me ouching for sure. I just love it when you slip that cheap California burgundy in....it's sort of like the 'where's Waldo' game. Cheerful indeed..... ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|You leave me speechless with this one, Jerry. Wow, very visceral and beautiful.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|A great write of passion my friend
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Yum! I love the way you describe your reactions!
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|Beautiful, passionate poem, Jerry|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Oh wow indeed Jerry as this is outstanding poetry and such a beautiful picture to go along with this amazing write laura
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|WOW... what a vision!
And you are able to watch her
this is written so beautifully
You write what your imagination
would love to see about this woman.
And... I may be wrong, but this is my view
A man sitting in a club watching this woman
doing her dance... A dance of desire
And of course she has breakable layers
this would be a tough job to make a living
Just a wonderful write, a wonderful vision
and a wonderful imagination to the setting
to another place.
Bravo Jerry! :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
|Ah, she has breakable layers...Women do, you know..Beautifully written with catchy lines, Jerry.....
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|A beautiful combination of passion and desire with tenderness and fragileness,
Mixed in the right proportions to a great write.
Very well done Jerry