|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|:) knowing why, the way to live|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|We need to let go of the past that is unbecoming to us,
until we do, we cannot move forward. So the dust pan
must be dumped cleaned off and move forward
Well done Deborah
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Clarence Prince
|"Always Knowing Why" Yes, why not?|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|very poignant deborah i liked this
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|So deeply moving and well written. Another fine piece of poetry!
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|This is a crunchy-good write, Deborah. Dustpan for rainy days is great, because it gives us permission to look at them 'on rainy days' when we might need or want to be sad or melancholy. Your last two lines are smashing. Knowing why....what a certitude to treasure. Thank you. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|"Do you just love
To get by"
All too often some do.