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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/22/2012 |
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a sad and very thoughtful poem, Lily,
well delivered
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/21/2012 |
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| To feel such pain is never forgotten~hopefully it brings some kind of good thru it all! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/19/2012 |
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| WHEN WE HURT...WE CRY. THUS, HEALING CAN BEGIN AND HOPEFULLY, THE RESIGNATION TO...MOVE ON. A FINE SKETCH OF ONE DEALING WITH THE 'STONES' OF LIFE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
8/19/2012 |
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| Beautiful work |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
8/18/2012 |
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| A bitter-sweet telling of a tale told before. Your approach makes it fresh again, and poignant all the same. You have a gift for romantic, lyrical writing that brings me joy each time I read it. Many thanks. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/18/2012 |
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| Well written. |
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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
8/18/2012 |
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A painful experience for this woman with a flavor of Ireland as the background. Well written and well expressed
Di |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
8/18/2012 |
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A sad poem with unknowingly circumstances.
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
8/17/2012 |
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I felt the pain of the Irish Laddie
while walking on the stones so uneven
*Carolee*
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| Reviewed by Keith Rowley |
8/17/2012 |
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| Superb. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
8/17/2012 |
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Those green eyes!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) |
8/17/2012 |
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You touch every emotion Lilly, sadness, pain, joy, love in all you write. Again another great work from you
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
8/17/2012 |
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a marvelous tale of a sad irish lady in a time everlasting by one who tells the story magnificently
budd |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/17/2012 |
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Reads like a history of Ireland. A fiery breed tamed by loss and time.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) |
8/17/2012 |
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Very sad indeed my dear lady Lily. A vision of a woman in pain, my hope is this woman is not you. But wonderfully penned with good imagery.
I bow and tip my hat to you
Cyrano |
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| Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) |
8/17/2012 |
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This reminds me of how I felt as my ex-husband walked away Lily. This poem speaks to me. Wonderful vision of a sad woman who is suffering pain of the loss of someone she loved and is resigned.
Gail |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/17/2012 |
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| An extremely sad piece. Ghostly memories of things that once were can truly be so very painful. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
8/17/2012 |
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Gorgeous poetry,Carole, and the pain and feelings are as real to the reader as they must be to the subject matter. This is just a great two lines in a poem that has many . . .
"Droplets falling in slow motion
Pooling onto the stones of what once were" |
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| Reviewed by luka tomlinson |
8/17/2012 |
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| I enjoyed the visuals here, you managed to create an aching timeline of fluent telling, well done. |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
8/16/2012 |
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You are totally able to put yourself in place of whatever you write about.
When you write about love, you ARE love at that moment
When you write about sickness, you ARE sickness at that moment
When you write about sadness, you ARE sadness at that moment
This is what makes your poems so extraordinary.
Although this is a very sad poem, it’s beautiful in all its sadness.
Every word is felt, all the deep and touching emotions. Every movement can be seen as if it happens before my eyes.
Wonderful Carolee
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
8/16/2012 |
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A very sad poem but one should never give up. No stronger emotion exists than love.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy |
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