|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Mended thoughts, pain released. Fantastic verses.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Amber I like this as much as anything I've read lately. Esp. that last verse is just wonderful.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|I always love the 'mended' part! :)|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|music collaboration - very kewl! broken then mended inspires the optimism of life|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|So much meaning in such a deceptively "straightforward" format and delivery, Amber. This is what will make them such powerful lyrics and I really hope to see them performed in Brooklyn one of these days! Well done to both of you and rock on! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Clarence Prince
|Indeed a lovely poem, Amber, nicely written, I like it. Blessings to you!!|
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Amber, I love this and the way you set it up...Another one to add to your top 10!!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|These words are so deep and very meanigful Amber as a broken heart many can relate to at one time in their life. A great poem indeed and how wonderful that your daughter is putting lyrics to this , Amazing talent she has Laura|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Amber this truly does sound like something wonder that can be set to music. It talks about the heartache of love and resignation and how well it is overcome.
Love and Light
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sounds like great lyrics to a song ...|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
A beautiful melody from poetry of a sweetheart.
I am elated that this will be on your daughter's CD.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|so i guess if the record become Gold you will get a percentage of the profits for being the songwriter??-Well Done Amber|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i agree-this is an awesome poem!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Love the ending and quite a poetic melody.|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Very nice poem Amber!
Your daughter is a shining light and will be a talented delight.
You and she will form a team in which songs are created from mother's dreams.
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|That's wonderful...putting music , :) best wishes,neerja|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Like Mother...like Daughter
talented and creative....
written lyrical for the soul
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Love the happy ending/last half of verses. Excellent as usual.
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|Good rhythms, sound sense in terms of content, resonant and rich... nicely done, Amber!
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|Amber yes this would make a great song and your daughter rendering it would make it complete for both of you
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Yes.This would make one hell of a song, Amber. Let us (at let least let me) know when it is out, I for one,would love to hear it.|