Possibility of Love
by Budd Nelson
Sunday, August 19, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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thoughts on the infinate possibilities that exist
Circles within circles touching circles
large circles, small circles, emmence circles.
Elipticles, ovals, flats, rounds, many kinds
some near, some far all in constant movement.
We're all but points along these circles
some of us on, some in and some about.
The possibility of any two
coming into contact are quite unkown.
The thought that those two are a perfect match
becomes an infantessimal amount.
So it is when two are allowed this chance
it may not be that they collide head on.
More possibly that contact only near
just near enough for the draw to be felt.
Though both may not feel this pull in the force
or ones momentum pushes it away.
But when they follow in gravitys flow
thier own new circle can then chart its own course.
When the attraction is perfectly strong
a single new being can then be formed.
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|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|An unusual and wise way of looking at attraction and love.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|A pivotel point that stops in it's track..love this!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Truly marvelous when that happens.|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|Such an elementally, geometrically induced truth. I feel like I just had a love in at a science lesson. Brilliant! Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Wow!! *Budd* Immensely written
with wisdom of understanding!!!
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Love conquers all. GREAT poetry Budd!|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Wow! I've always said it's about circles! So deep!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A deep and heartfelt write written so amazingly laura|
|Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
|A very deep, intellectual comparison of love and its theories, Budd. I find this most certainly stimulating and if closing my eyes, I can see exactly what your analogy looks like. Very unique, clever and well written in every way..
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|What a beautiful description, it reminds me of a song by Clannad, "I will find you."
It's a spiritual song of course, but very closely resembles what you write about. It's about twin souls searching for one another.
Beautiful Budd :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Thus, tis better to "be in love with you," as opposed to existing outside the essence of love, i.e., without clinging, without attachment, for therein two might become as one with the intersecting circles of love you describe, totally irrelevant of object, flesh, body attachments. It takes a lot of experience sometimes to learn that attachment (misunderstood love) is the root of most unhappiness.|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I think you're describing natural selection. I think that love has little to do with creating a new being. But lust has a lot.
I was enamored by the circular contrails that some people think are very sinister things. From my observations I gather that these are for passengers caught in a circular waiting pattern before they can land. Having been there and done that, I sympathize with these contrails.
|Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
|As you describe the whole process, the chance to meet your perfect match is close to zero and can not be expressed in a pro millage.
So if you've found her and she feels the same way, it can not be else as that it's the prefect match.