|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|so gentle, such silvery gliding words of wistful remembering...i could feel each nuance of emotions.
how i would love to hear Garrison Keillor's rendition of reciting this wonderful work
|Reviewed by J Howard
|When we "cannot" speak, our heart does. Lovely sentiment and beautifully written.
thank you for sharing-
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Beautifully penned, Lonnie! Guess we all have "what if" moments to reflect upon...lovely phrasing.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|My goodness Lonnie, this is gorgeous and very emotive.|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Lovely writing Lonnie bringing to life not only past memories but giving 'flummoxed' a place to call home.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A beautiful remembrance, beautifully expressed. I too had those moments, those opportunities to connect that somehow, it didn't happen.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Marvelous emotion in this, and gentle and resonant ~|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|You've penned a gentle and poignant chapter of life. The sense of melancholy's insistence is only upstaged by the fine sense of humble understanding. Well done.|