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| Reviewed by kumar schamp |
8/26/2012 |
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| well...a realistic view of a reasonable girl who never tries for the other world.seems illusion but no other ways....nice touch. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/22/2012 |
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So many seem to be left out these days living lonely lives. When they do find someone they are taking advantage of. There's a tinge of sadness in this poem. For some who fate does not treat fairly, life can be depressing.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
8/22/2012 |
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Life is a gamble as most see it
But life is also what you make it
This soul has not made the life
she wants.
For if you feel it and love it
it will come :)
Great write Jane
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
8/22/2012 |
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| Sometimes you just need to turn the right corner to find someone who will understand her ways. Nice work. |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
8/21/2012 |
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Yes..life's a gamble.play it....better chances are to emerge happy
Best wishes....nice write, Jane
Neerja:) |
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