|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|I like the way the first half of this poem is dedicated to description of a setting, with such detail including the moonlight "spotlighting the grass", very unique visual. Alloting just that many lines for the setting was brilliant, because by doing this, you already have us primed for an 'event' being placed within this setting, inviting us through the curtains of an open window. Who doesn't get piqued by that offer? The crescendo of wind and whispers, shimmy and dance....great finale! ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|This is simply enchanting....I LOVE the word "zephyr"...and you've penned a magical poem about it.....awesome!
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|oh, August's hot days and cool nights ...yes this is good.|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I would have a movie camera going and make money on this!
Seriously, this is so romantic!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Marvelous poetry indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Silent Night..stunning in beauty and heart~|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Ah, building for discovery. My kind of poetry.|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|I could see every glorious picture
I could feel the gentle zephyr
I could smell the lovely scents
What a BEAUTIFUL scene Jerry, just BEAUTIFUL
And my idea is, there was a lot of love
occurring this night until eyelids closed ("windows slams shut")
and the beauty of what happened left two
sleeping peacefully while now only stars observed :)
I can't say it enough Jerry, fantastic as always
Love and Light
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|...right from the early simile through all the well-wrought imagery up to the closing pair of personifications, this is a treat... a real treat!
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|Beautiful imagery, Jerry! wonderfully written, you took me there ...|
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|Ζέφυρος (Zephyr) is the gentlest of all winds and that's how you paint this beautiful gentle night vision.
Very much enjoyed Jerry
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|i really enjoyed the night visions you so well portrayed here my friend