|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The fine imagery that you have used serves to emphasize the theme of your poem, Carol. Well done. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|The full circle of emotions are touched in this piece. Love is something we should never turn back on when both share the same feelings. Wonderful write.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Likened to the weaving of a
tapestry to become one of
magic...I loved your poem
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|I feel lots of movement in this poem. There is much happening in here, and to express the motion in the form of 'tumbleweeds' and sand across feet, scuttling scorpion of 'anguish' (that is some vivid illustration for emotional sting!). Nice progression from thirst to oasis, Lily. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|the heart will have its way, or die trying. enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|This takes us to the world of fantasy where love takes many decisions. You fear has abated and "there's no turning back this time"
Excellent, very excellent indeed
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Enchanting poetry written so heartfelt and meaningful this is truly excellent writing Laura
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|Dear Lady Lily, so many have said what I would say. Destiny of the heart dear lady. The heart knows.
I bow and tip my hat to you
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Destiny of the heart ever to be. Lovely penned with images
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Down The Path of Intrigue,
On The Desert of Destiny,
No Turning Back This Time
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Great! You are bravely following your heart and are ready to truly love. This is some super fine work!
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|beneath these metaphors of mindfulness lie symbols of subconscious thought submerged in archetypes of the unconscious... while looming large on the horizon is the nascent nuance of eccentricity with a radiance of phosporescent phenomenology...
I enjoyed your rich and radiant foray into this highly allusive artformidable landscape... nicely done, Carolee
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|It's wonderful how you weave the words of this song, together with the fantasy of your own words to this beautiful Desert of Destiny
Very well done Carolee, Chapeau !!!
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Mystery, suspense and the " Desert of Destiny, " Very interesting!!
|Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
|This is interesting poetry, a metaphor of fantasy about a man who loves you. And you're contemplating, but not turning back this time. I like it Carol.
|Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
|I like the imagery in this, and I like the concept of a desert of destiny.|
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|wow Lilly what a vision and a story, and there's no turning back this time. He touched your heart
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|what a simply wonderful visual journey through an outworldly place of fantastic images and the coming of peace and love to the dispared
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|"In search of the next victim of venom / Within the walls of turmoil"
Knowing al that, Carol, still there isn't one thing to be done to keep from loving him. We have to, we must, find out for ourselves.