|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|I like that image of a paradise feathered for you, pretty unique but so descriptive at the same time. this has a pleasant, dreamy feel to it.|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|Magical effect in verse. Last three lines are ringing with flare. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Beautiful, descriptive words wrapped up in glimpses and feelings of paradise. Your words and the photo you selected all lead up to words of poetic excellence. This is a truly lovely poem; well done, Vivian.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|sunlight and shadow suffused in a coalescence of sound and sense... marvelously dense and compact for one so light on her feet...
rare and radiant... and titled with my favorite word, too.... what more could a poet/reader ask for in a poem... dear Vivian?
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Visions of freedom...
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Dream on a Cloud...light and beautiful~|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Beautiful vision Vivian
One to hold close :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Excellent poetry and stunning photo laura|
|Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
|awesome -luv this|
|Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
|WHERE IN THIS WORLD DO YA COME UP WITH THE PICS TO FIT IN WITH THE POETRY!!!!!!!!LOL HG|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The height of bliss is generally in the mind, as you so brilliantly imply.
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|drifting beautifully as soft as a feather...love this one, anna|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lady Vivian ~
Lovely alluring softness drifting in the paradise.
Love the feathered image.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Ah, and what a wonderful feathered paradise it will be, Vivian. Your descriptive words paint such an intense, but harmonizing picture.|