Balanced Moments
by Amber V Moonstone
Sunday, September 02, 2012
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Sunshine and the ocean what an inspiration to be positive and balanced. |
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Balanced Moments
by Amber "V" Moonstone
9/2/12
Sunshine melting my grayness,
Ocean breezes soothing my stress,
Seagulls flying, lifting me to greater heights,
seashells found, grounding my spirit.
Just one day at the ocean,
turns my head to level ground,
planting one foot upon the shore,
brings balance once more.
Vistas bright with promise,
sand abrasive but soothing,
salty water, cleansingly purifying,
sanity found gratifying.
Searing heat, feeling comfort,
pounding waves, tender thoughts,
rocky waters, steadfast journey,
racing boats, wakeful moments.
"Sandy beaches,
salty ocean,
Radiant sunshine,
Balanced moments."
"Balanced Moments" (c) Amber "V" Moonstone
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
9/17/2012 |
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| Reading your poetry is a way of regaining balance just as if you are at the shores of peace and love. Wonderful poem. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/12/2012 |
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And peace of mind a well worth while walk
along the beach, much appreciated
Love & peace be with you
Willam |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/11/2012 |
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| CAN'T GET TO THE SEA AS I WOULD LIKE BUT, YES! NATURE IN OTHER FORMS IS ALL AROUND US TO REMIND US THAT 'HE' WHO BALANCED AND MADE ALL THINGS PERFECTLY, IS HE WHO KEEPS US 'BALANCED'...MOMENT AFTER MOMENT. A FINE WORK, AMBER. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
9/10/2012 |
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ahhh, i can smell that salty sea air!
very effective, amber, very lovely!
be well, poetess,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
9/8/2012 |
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I feel refreshed just reading this richly perceptive poem!
Love to you, xx
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
9/7/2012 |
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| Your poem held many pieces of magic in its lines for me. So many therapy-giving facets you placed in this poem, the reading of it feels nothing less than refreshing. Making the last stanza italicized was a plus, and underscoring your premise of 'balance, ' those elements given were perfect....rocky, steadfast, lifting and grounding, racing and wakeful moments. I enjoyed reading this. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
9/4/2012 |
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Love and romance are always found by the ocean as in your words Amber.
Rose |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
9/4/2012 |
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Amber ~
A day of ocean breeze and essence of the salty air
ahhh! to love that ! Sea shells to hold in ones hand !
The best a day can bring in your poetry along the ocean shore.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/4/2012 |
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Just one day at the ocean,
turns my head to level ground,
planting one foot upon the shore,
brings balance once more.
It's truly marvelous when we have such a place; mine is a serene green forest. |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/3/2012 |
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Your beach of peace and calm
perfect for your "Balanced
Moments" *Amber* knowing
medicine can do NO better!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
9/3/2012 |
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| sounds like a beach i want to explore someday--well done |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
9/3/2012 |
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| A soothing write indeed written so amazingly as always Excellent poetry Laura |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/3/2012 |
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The seaside can do that to you––make you whole from just the experience. One such day was the source of my poem, Relaxing. Relaxing is one of my most sought after poems on the Internet.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/3/2012 |
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| Darn, that ocean is just too far from me, I LOVE the ocean! I will always include it in my travels! We have to balance what comes our way :) |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/3/2012 |
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| You have it all figured out, Amber, and figured out correctly in my opinion. Let's hear it for Balanced Moments! |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
9/2/2012 |
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| yes yes !!! here's to sun! |
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