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Tear Drop
by Carrie P Corral

Tuesday, September 04, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A tear drop A love that dies
A heart that breaks
All because of a guy
Who was a mistake

I'll be crying in the rain
Hoping it will wash away my pain

I gave you my heart,
with tender love and care
All you did was drop it,
And walk away as if you didn't even care

For the last time
I look into your eyes
Wondering if what you said
Wasn't all just lies

I loved you from the start
All you gave me was a broken heart
Your gentle touch and tender kiss 
Are some of the things I will always miss

But without warning you said goodbye
I wanted you so much
Hate how you feel my high
So farewell tough guy

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Reviewed by Liana Margiva 9/5/2012
BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Connie Faust 9/5/2012
The last line sounds like a determined of good courage. This too will pass away.
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Reviewed by Paivi Giannios 9/5/2012
A very touching poem, Carrie; very emotionally effective and appealing. As a reader, I can definitely identify with the painful experience you write about.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/5/2012
Definitely time to move on. You are showing the signs of it already. Put it down in a poem and leave it there. More life ahead.


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