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Carrie P Corral

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Tear Drop
by Carrie P Corral
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A tear drop A love that dies
A heart that breaks
All because of a guy
Who was a mistake

I'll be crying in the rain
Hoping it will wash away my pain

I gave you my heart,
with tender love and care
All you did was drop it,
And walk away as if you didn't even care

For the last time
I look into your eyes
Wondering if what you said
Wasn't all just lies

I loved you from the start
All you gave me was a broken heart
Your gentle touch and tender kiss 
Are some of the things I will always miss

But without warning you said goodbye
I wanted you so much
Hate how you feel my high
So farewell tough guy

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Reviewed by Liana Margiva
BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Connie Faust
The last line sounds like a determined of good courage. This too will pass away.
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Reviewed by Paivi Giannios
A very touching poem, Carrie; very emotionally effective and appealing. As a reader, I can definitely identify with the painful experience you write about.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Definitely time to move on. You are showing the signs of it already. Put it down in a poem and leave it there. More life ahead.

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