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Sun of the Moon
by Vivian L Dawson
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Sun of the Moon 

Fly me Autumn of
the moon before
a daunting season
of Winter begins..

For a luminescence
permeating the changing
colors of my mind
eliminating hibernation..

As my only love and I
stroll hand in hand
under a lamppost meant
for us to find..

Framing our place in the
Universe as the sun shines
within expressive full moon 

directing light to shine 
ahead for each other's

unending paths towards
happiness

(c) Sun of the Moon
09September2012
Vivian L Dawson

 

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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Vor der Kaserne,Vor dem grossen Tor,Stand eine Laterne,
Underneath the lantern, By the barrack gate,
Your theme was popular with both German and Allied soldiers during WW2. Your poem has the same poignancy as the song. I'm sure the old warriors would approve.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Peacful Beauty~
Reviewed by George Dominguez
What a beautiful full moon where a lamppost seem to be amongs the tree ready to bring the coolness of the night. Brillant and impressive of how you penned this one beautiful picture with you lovely words of poetry from the heart. THE WISE OLD OWL
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
dreamy.
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
"Fly me Autumn..." what a grand three words to begin this piece. Especially prominent for me are "eliminating hibernation.." and "...our place in the/Universe" (I enjoyed being reminded that we have a 'place' in the Universe) and "...full moon/directing light" reminding us that the moon reflects the sun, rounding us back to your title, "Sun of the Moon." Very satisfying. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Laura Fall
Beautifully written poetry indeed Laura
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Beautiful writing....
fee
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
ah walking in the moonlight ahhhh
budd
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
VERY NICE!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
There is nothing like a moonlit walk with the one you love for the cold chill of winter breathes down your neck.

Ron
Reviewed by Joy Hale
Such a lovely, soft spoken tale of the wonder of autumn and your only love and you enjoying the seasons moonlight under a special lamp post for two. A dynamite picture to set the complete mood of your words spoken so eloquently.

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
HI VIVIAN , REMINDS ME OF THE SONG THE SILVERY MOON. NOTHING LIKE WALKING WHILE A FULL MOON IS SHINING. THANKS AGAIN FOR WONDERFUL WORDS...ANNA
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Lady Vivian ~
Beauty of colour, under the lamp post, unending
paths towards happiness. Spellbound in this
sweet rendering song of the season.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
You give us much to see and contemplate, Vivian. The autumn of our thoughts are contained within the verses of this splendid poetry.

"under a lamppost meant
for us to find."

That is the ultimate guarantee, things out there that we are supposed to find. Excellent.
Reviewed by D. Vegas
Visions of contentment and love, Enjoyed, Vivian...

Deborah
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
What a beautiful vision Vivian :)
"Framing our place in the
Universe as the sun shines"

Just an absolutely beautiful picture of two

Love and Light
Lily
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