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by Felix LeRoy Perry

Friday, September 14, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Broken Man

He’ll disguise his tears in falling rain

As around his `heart he’ll built a wall

False façade to hide the love he lost

It needs to be erected strong and tall


In the dark alone, he’ll slip unnoticed

Far from all his family and his friends

Delving into recesses of tortured mind

Where…the memory of her never ends


Each day he’ll seem a little bit colder

As blood turns to ice inside each vein

He's giving up on all he once believed

Until the day he finally goes insane


Is he fated to salvation or damnation

It really don’t seem to matter anymore

Death can come calling when its ready

He’ll meet it at the door….









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Reviewed by Debbie Lacy 10/5/2012
Much melancholy here, as losing a loved one can be quite painful! It isn't always easy. Great write & thanks for the share Felix! Blessings to you!
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 10/1/2012
This reverberating write starts with a line that contains much. If this were a book, that opening line would surely let me know I was in for a substantive read. This poem was that substantive read. Ruin could not be written better than this. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Jon Willey 9/27/2012
fatalistic Felix - the tragedy of loss can overwhelm a heart and lead to a bleak existence just above vital - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/17/2012
Tragic when a heart is so crushed....great phrasing, Fee...deeply touching...

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 9/14/2012
To be so in love and to lose it is a pain beyond pain which you have expressed so vividly here!

Love ya!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson 9/14/2012
finely express sadness of love lost Fe
Reviewed by Joy Hale 9/14/2012
Chillinly sad and raw with emotions of a lost love. Wonderfully written, Fee.

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/14/2012
Painfully raw...
Reviewed by neerja gandhi 9/14/2012
Ooh....sad..not to give up :(
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/14/2012
a lot of sadness within your lines Felix. but indeed an excellent write.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 9/14/2012
A poem many of us can, and do, relate to. The tragedy of love lost is difficult to deal with. Very much so.
Reviewed by D. Vegas 9/14/2012
Fee, This sounds very personal and very sorrowful...
A poem filled with many human emotions. Excellent!

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow 9/14/2012
This just breaks the heart.. and for someone who was once in the psycology field it bring back memories of painful to hear moments.. well done, my friend

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