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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
10/17/2012 |
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| Three points of this poem, Vivian, swell out from this wonderful writing. First: "as the shadow becomes the/ faith behind our back..." how unique I find this correlary; and I immediately thought of reversing the shadow to be in front of us and we step into our destiny and faith. Second: "....junctions becoming/less cumbersome one by one" oh, what truth is that. With age comes wisdom, but as you say here, with experience so does the wisdom arrive. Third: "A journey where we were not/meant to stay..." I like that. I like this whole creation. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
9/18/2012 |
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All journeys are a process of understanding our-self
Well done
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/17/2012 |
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A lot to ponder, but I would suffice to say that it is the process, the journey
through life that makes us who we are, and not where we end up.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
9/17/2012 |
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Lady Vivian ~
A wonderfully symphony in the journey of life ~
Fantastic poetry.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/16/2012 |
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Life is a journey indeed and I am on board!
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
9/16/2012 |
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| You have maintained that climbing up the staircase of life imagery right throughout the piece without it seeming too contrived. some really good phrases too. I particularly like your second verse, it really captures your theme perfectly. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/16/2012 |
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Oustanding poetry, To your journey may it be in technicolor!
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by william goldman (Reader) |
9/16/2012 |
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| YOU DID IT AGAIN,!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY GOOD, LIKED VERY MUCH.--LOL HG |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/16/2012 |
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Wonderful words and phrases...
fee |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/16/2012 |
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"...A journey where we were not meant to stay..."
is the most truthful way of seeing it, the one
certainty. As Christine says, such a wise poem;
fine delivery, Vivian
john |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
9/15/2012 |
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You write of wisdom and knowledge with your choice of words describing the travel through ones life. The photo speaks a thousand words of which you have chosen many pithy ones to demonstrate the journey.
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
9/15/2012 |
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| Such a wise poem, Vivian ~ |
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| Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) |
9/15/2012 |
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| THE JOURNEY IS NEVER OVER,,,THERE IS ALWAYS ANOTHER ADVENTURE...SUCH IS THE PROCESS OF LIFE. LOVELY VIVIAN KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK, ANNA |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
9/15/2012 |
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We are born,grow,grow old,death...Yes the journey is long, but what a ride it is! Immensely enjoyed,Vivian!
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/15/2012 |
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the journey is never over Vivian
budd |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/15/2012 |
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The start of this poem made me think of the title of a book I read, must be fifty years ago, with the name of "Up the Down Staircase."
Back to your poem. You, of course, are so correct in saying that . . . "they will / be measured by deeds along / the way by their portrayal / for a world without end"
Our journey is the destination. That is profound, Vivian. |
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