|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|What a jewel of a poem, Jerry. I love the arrangement of words in "Think not morning shall come," that line feels quiet and somehow wise. Appreciated this greatly. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|wistfully sad words jerry...relateable to everyone...wrapped up and fully said in a brief sharing of pain. hope it wasn't yours.
the last two poems i posted were written with my daughter heavy on my heart during the wrenching apart of her beautiful little family.
most readers assumed they were about me...not this time.....so i guess we never know...pat
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|The light will come, your heart will be happy
in the dark there are many things because we
have entered another dimension. It is at this
moment our loved ones are the closest to us.
So if you wish to stay dark and be ever close
to them this is what you will experience just
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|some nights longer than others, and then there are those rainy dark dismal day's that turn right back into dark. That is why those sunny day's are that much brighter when they come back....and they do.|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|So sad...heartbreaking that a human soul must endure so much pain...to be trapped in a world with no light....very well penned, Jerry...
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Some of those starless nights can seem so damn long! The wheel is always moving though rest assured. Some darn little beam of light will find you!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Seek the Light *Jerry*
as You are Worthy....
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Lift up that heart, let the light shine in :)|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|A very deeply moving poem this am. I can relate, at times things seem so dark and hopeless but always one should try to find the positive light in each situation. It can bring you to the edge of daylight.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|So heavy and sad, Jerry. I read a sign recently that said "There is Always, Always, Always something to be grateful for." If you are down and blue... I wish bright morning sun to warm you and give you a happier outlook on life. That said, your words touched my heart, for I, as most other people, have experienced dark days in my life. Always seek the light!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|Light has always come back, not only with dawn but also in your heart.
Look back at your life and you will see how the dark moments always disappeared at the moment you allowed the light to come in.
Dawn has never disappointed us.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|As I read this, I too, feel the sad weight of longing and loss...hard hitting Jerry.
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|I hope that your heart allows the light to come my friend, it is the light that is beautiful and warms our days