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Sweet Surender
by Felix LeRoy Perry

Sunday, September 16, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Some dreams are meant to be shared...


 

 

 

Sweet Surrender

 

Reaching down he offered her his big hand

She gripped it and climbed up on back

Life-sized toy pony called Sweet Surrender

With rag mane and velvet covered soft tack

 

Turning he smiled and said hold on tightly

He said I know a place we need to explore

In his eyes she saw the days of tomorrow

When they kissed, both wanted much more

 

They rode through dreams undiscovered

Where romance once more flourished and grew

They rode above the rain of each past hurt

Taking time to explore each other all new

 

When they awoke the very next morning

They heard the pony clip clopping away

Sweet Surrender had left with the sunrise

Leaving them together forever to stay...

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/11/2012
the ride of romance Felix, is a journey we make on our own - a good and willing pony named desire adds zest - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
Reviewed by Donna Chandler 9/18/2012
The ending tied everything up beautifully.

Donna
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 9/18/2012
Now this is a beautiful romantic ride Fee

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/17/2012
Now that's a pony that everyone should ride. I'm going to go poke myself and see if I'm dreaming.

Ron
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/17/2012
I just love where your mind wanders Felix. Fantastic.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO Rose
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 9/17/2012
Fee ~
A romance in mystic enchantment.
Love your "Sweet Surrender" poem.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/17/2012
Completely enchanting!!! Wonderful read, Fee...

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 9/16/2012
Sweet Surrender is certainly a special messenger bringing lovers to a new beginning! What a lovely story!

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow 9/16/2012
Another fine one... a bit mystical, a bit romantic.. and a whole lot good!
Myrna
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/16/2012
Now that is one clever pony.... :) your poem is magical Fee~
Hugs,
Chrissie
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 9/16/2012
Ah, Felix your romance is showing. I liked this. An aura of innocence is within the lines of the poem, which is a good thing. I loved the ending. Yes.



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