|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Tears dampen your words.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|a poetic descent into sadness!
I hope you feel better soon Deborah, Blessings,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|So very sad.|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|Dear Lord it must be going around. You know I have heard that fall is a harbenger of depression for many, being as the sunlight shrinks, and it is for me. Deborah...may I offer you a hand of friendship and shared support? Your write was much briefer than my recent offering but spoke so elequently, so grippingly, of exactly where I go as well. You touched my heart deeply. If this comes but from your imagination, I am happy for your well being and astounded to my core. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Fallen deep, but only
up from there *Deborah*
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|The well you write about is a tough one to climb out of sometimes. You will!
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Naught a good place to be, never spiral within
yourself to this place for it only goes further
down into the abyss
Expressively felt write that tells much
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|avery deep sorrowful write Deborah
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|"Would you like/To subscribe/To this deep well" those lines carry much heaviness and angst. This poem is effectively conveying much emotion, and the last line "I think Not... ..." contains in it a slow head shake to be sure. Greatly expressive. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I think we all go there at times and we all must struggle to find the light again...intense write.