|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Dreams are a refuge...whether good or bad. And our minds escape to that reality for the time being through our wondrous and random imagination. I thrive on them. Your work expresses this so well and eloquently, Jane.|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Always happens when a dream starts getting good...
Very well done,Jane.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Darn! Why do some dreams have to be that way? I try not to rely on dreams and go with the real thing.
|Reviewed by Teresa Walker
|I was dreaming as I read,
this beautiful poem now in my head.
Abandoned words put to pen,
For all of us on authorsden.
Go back to sleep and tell me more,
This dream from you opened many doors.
It took me to a place in time,
That look, that touch, was only mine.
Loved the poem Jane!!!!
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|For what beauty we can find in the deep
recesses of our mind within our dreams
Oh how beautiful yes, for those forbidden
lovely things to surface only to find we
must wake up.
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Well written poem , Jane|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|Good. Good. I loved this one Jane. The rythm kept momentum building to the surprising yet not so surprising end. Well crafted poem. I admire this. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Aw, shucks and be dammed. Waking up can be such a killjoy.|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|dreams of this type make you wonder