|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Blind love to remember
of the first, but not
linger..eyes open wide
|Reviewed by Christine Volkoff
|At the risk of repeating myself, I have to say that you have this incredible knack for saying a huge amount in very few words! This says so much, in ways that we all can identify with...true art :)|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I, too, married my first love - and it ended quite horridly.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Our pasts are often remembered more vividly and with deeper emotion then our present but love is still, even unrecoprocated love, is indeed something to remember.
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|One never forgets that first love.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|lot's of love's, maybe there is only one true.|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
An excellent write of first love.
My first love I watched from my bedroom window as they drove by.
He had just married my best friend.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|first loves are almost always at odds with not knowing about love itself
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Sometimes what we love and desire does not love us back.
I was madly in love with my 5th grade teacher Mr. Knox
He was my first love crush, but what does a child know
of adult love :) I was crushed and unhappy because he
didn't choose me as one of the singers in the choir lol
If he could only here me now :)
I am pretty good!
And of course what I thought the first time was a first
love turned out to be a disappointment and hurt as an
adult... se la vie
Wonderful write Deborah and lovely paining :)
Love and Light