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My First Love
by D. L. Vaineo

Tuesday, September 25, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I married my first love...

It was in the Fall
When my heart
Dropped off a clift
My salvation-
Was my soul that saw
All of this before...
Lovers past-
Why it did not last
My heart has always
Been kind-
Back then...
I carried anger
As an extra treat
It was my defense
Acting like a child
When I did not get
What I wanted...   ..
My first Love

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Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 9/26/2012
Blind love to remember
of the first, but not
linger..eyes open wide

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Christine Volkoff 9/26/2012
At the risk of repeating myself, I have to say that you have this incredible knack for saying a huge amount in very few words! This says so much, in ways that we all can identify with...true art :)
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/26/2012
I, too, married my first love - and it ended quite horridly.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/26/2012
Our pasts are often remembered more vividly and with deeper emotion then our present but love is still, even unrecoprocated love, is indeed something to remember.
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 9/25/2012
One never forgets that first love.

Love ya!

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 9/25/2012
lot's of love's, maybe there is only one true.
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 9/25/2012
Deborah ~
An excellent write of first love.
My first love I watched from my bedroom window as they drove by.
He had just married my best friend.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 9/25/2012
LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 9/25/2012
first loves are almost always at odds with not knowing about love itself
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 9/25/2012
Sometimes what we love and desire does not love us back.
I was madly in love with my 5th grade teacher Mr. Knox
He was my first love crush, but what does a child know
of adult love :) I was crushed and unhappy because he
didn't choose me as one of the singers in the choir lol

If he could only here me now :)
I am pretty good!

And of course what I thought the first time was a first
love turned out to be a disappointment and hurt as an
adult... se la vie

Wonderful write Deborah and lovely paining :)

Love and Light

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