by Amber V Moonstone
Friday, September 28, 2012
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Can it really be true to travel in your dreams?
by Amber "V" Moonstone
Dreaming of dipping,
into your dreams,
where passion lava filled pies,
are eaten every moment.
Dream of such a place,
float in and out,
as the cosmos beckons,
and the starlight beams.
Lava pie eating,
Let me fulfill your desires,
render you helpless
with just one look,
while awaiting that moan of silence.
Nowhere but in our dreams,
can love be kenetic,
awe inspiring, mind blowing
and forever eternal.
dip with me,
within the twilight of our dreams,
allowing me to envelop you whole.
"Dream Dipping" (c) Amber "V" Moonstone
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|"Dream dipping" or "skinny dipping"... ...they both offer a freedom to explore and to feel; to breathe in life and even the unknown in some ways. Anyway, that's what your verses made me think of. Thank you, Amber. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|What an erotic thought to be enveloped by You pretty lady. I like thos very much.........GOD BLESS YOU........Always, Tony.|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Dream dipping Oooooo! so sensual within the twilight.
Lovely poem to the cosmos of dreams.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Beth Anderle
|Amber, overall this is a good poem. I like your image of "dream dipping"; it is so unique! It really captured my imagination and you weave a very sensual story here! There are a few things that distracted me, however. I think that the second stanza might be improved by editing some of the extra words. For example, "Dream of such a place, float in and out, as the cosmos beckons and the starlight beams," "eat passion filled lava pies every moment." You might also delete "while" in the last line of the fourth stanza. This subtle change would allow you captures the very essence of what you are saying without losing the fluidity of the poem and distracting from your imagery. Thank you so much for sharing this poem - after reading it I can't wait to dream tonight! I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
|Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
|dream onward, sounds delicious|
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|Borrow her pillow??-I want to find out what she ate -LOL-well if we could dip into other poet's dreams then i think the Den might set off a lot of fires-quite the poetic imagery you weaved here|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|sensational! I want to borrow your pillow!!!!|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! 'while awaiting that moan of silence'---I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|.... ooo yeah... strawberry dreams dipped in liquid chocolate passion! You're making me ravenous, Amber! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|wow, dream-dipping ... great idea .... wonderful poem ...|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|You had me from the title. Dream Dipping...alliteration, one of my favorite things, and intriguing...Lovely lines, original angle, imaginative. This is a quality poem in my eyes. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Amber, I think there is much to be said of one's dreams and the brain
so much they do not know about it still...One of your best!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Wow, this is Truly Excellent poetry my friend laura|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|That would really be too wonderful dipping into someone dreams so sweet. Unfortunately, like so many of nature's lures out there, the last line is scary.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Refreshing..fulfilling that special spot that only you know about, I love this Amber~
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Beautiful rendering of dream emotions
fulfilling love with desires *Amber*
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|It is within the beauty of one's controlled dreams
that one can experience such a beautiful view with
the wonderful passion so described Amber
Really enjoyed this one
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|I know if it would be possible to travel to your dreams Amber, you would be the first in line for your ticket.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Dream Dipping sounds marvelous.|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|ahh yes it would be great to be able to dream dip into those of the one you care for so much