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On Waves
by Christine Alwin

Saturday, September 29, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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On Waves

The tide came in, on blue waves,
flushed her cheeks, pastel pink,
blending in with the setting sun,
salt water healed open wounds

Heart pattered to pounding surf,
her laughter lifted nearby gulls,
they flew, noting her found love,
that rolled in, from keeper of  stars

The tide went out, on cold waves,
how dare they take this given gift,
opening wounds, raw once more,
tears washed away sand at feet,

Ah, but so they thought they did,
she winked at the almighty sea,
halfway smirk, knowing this treasure,
was given to her, blessed for keeps

 

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Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 1/12/2013
Written with a great deal of depth....M
Reviewed by Axilea MU 12/13/2012
Last night I wrote something about a cold sea and a warm vision that is shared... funny how the sea inspires us and reflects our moods and emotions. As a reader, I feel close to this woman and understand the cyclical nature of things that come and go, until we are no longer scared of living.

Axilea
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 10/22/2012
"her laughter lifted nearby gulls..." ahhh so sweet
this entire poem is beautiful!!
& also too takes me to missing Gene
he would love this poem too

Love's Bounty & Sacred Essence
Vickie xx
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/16/2012
MARVELOUS WORK ABOUT LIFE, REALLY. THERE'S UPS AND DOWNS, INS AND OUTS BUT IT AIN'T OVER 'TIL GOD SAYS IT OVER. SO THE OLD RIVER JUST ROLLS ALONG...STAYING ON COURSE. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FINE WORK, CHRISTINE...LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Dark Knight 10/14/2012
lovely poetry from a beautiful woman
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 10/9/2012
Very lovely written piece.......GOD BLESS YOU and YOURS.......Always Tony
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/8/2012
Christine, you've returned with a flourish and an original perception filled with emotions from the heart - it is a rendering that speaks to the rationale of nature's gifts - I wish you love and peace my dear friend, Jon Michael
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley 10/3/2012
Colourfilled. . . . . . Brilliant
Shines through as one of your best!!!
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/2/2012
Circular, authentic and so full of wisdom dearest Christine!
This speaks of such vulnerability and surrender to love.
Blessings, xo
Christine
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/1/2012
this is a beautifully written poem,
Christine,
truly beautiful


don't be away too long, please


john
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/1/2012
Enchanting!!!!!!!!! Keeping this one to enjoy over and over again....Beautiful poetry, Christine...and one of my favourite subjects.......the sea....

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/1/2012
A lovely poem Christine, and have a wonderful time away.
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 9/30/2012
miss you already, this is a treat of a poem!
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 9/30/2012
How truly beautiful Christine

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 9/30/2012
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 9/30/2012
The mighty waters are such a medium of giving and taking in such dramatic ways. But the secrets she imparts and is party to... now that's another story and she must own many hundreds of thousands if you think that each glint on the waves is a wink (or a halfway smirk!) from each of us who has taken her into our confidence! Love this, Christine. May the sea wash you safe back onto our AD shores before too long... Take care xx
Reviewed by jude forese 9/30/2012
wonderful poem ...

keep safe and well ...
Reviewed by Connie Faust 9/29/2012
What a treasure to leave behind!
God bless you as you forge another path; may it be filled with light and fellowship with Him.

Connie
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 9/29/2012
A poem after my own heart. I can feel those ocean breezes filled with the magic of soulmate love.
Will miss u much be well be safe and return sooner rather than later
Peace and love my special friend
Amber
Reviewed by D. Vegas 9/29/2012
Thank you,Christine and we will see you when you return...

Deborah
Reviewed by Joy Hale 9/29/2012
Splendid poetry here, Christine. The words are clever, deeply thought out and just plain ole' good! Keep winking at the almighty sea and come back to us soon, for you will be missed by all.

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Laura Fall 9/29/2012
You will be missed my sweet friend as you leave us with this outstanding poem (Hugs) laura
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/29/2012
A uniquely written and beautiful poem. Thoughts as deep as the sea.

Ron
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 9/29/2012
Dear Christine, As usual, I am very happy to see your poem, and this one in particular, with multiple stanzas is very well penned. I was also pleased to see your new picture. Love Emile
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 9/29/2012
i love ocean actions
budd
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE 9/29/2012
ahhh, a refreshing pause, as waves subside, and the long lingering looks, so like the setting sun, so like the lifting wind carrying the cruising gulls... nothing like this imagery and the kind of inverse pathetic fallacy that you make it engender within the heart and soul of your protagonist, the speaker who is as always playing blessed for keeps... stay strong, Christine, as you will be missed by all of us who revere your inimitable style... may wonders never cease.

Roger
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 9/29/2012
Greatly missed *Christine*
on waves of Love, I pray..
loved your poem as blessings
will surely follow for peace

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 9/29/2012
Taking on the sea is a challenge for any poet, but again and again, I have seen you master it and, nay, excel in what the sea gives you, n'er to be returned, always close to your heart. I hope it is good tidings which will keep you away.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/29/2012
The beauty of your words touch mind and heart and as the Last two lines say with a halfway smirk love given is never taken back, as always you will be missed
fee
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/29/2012
Please note, I will be away from the den for a while..I love you all..thanks for your support and friendship~ Embrace each day!



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