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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
10/16/2012 |
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| Those beautiful Emerald eyes shine right through this excellent chapter of erotic bliss. A romantic piece highlighted by your pen............GOD BLESS YOU and YOURS.........Tony |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/14/2012 |
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| his reach for a "woman with razor blades and dice in her eyes (peridot), just a touch of sadness in her fingers and thunder and lightning in her thighs" will be his undoing - Belle, surely this will be the unquestioned winner of the Felix halloween challenge - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/7/2012 |
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I feel transported back to another century. I am also intrigued by the word “entrance.” Both meanings apply. This looks to be an epic poem fit for a book. But then, that is probably your intent all along it
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
10/7/2012 |
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Lady La Belle ~
Tantalizing touch of Red. Wonderfully enchanting !!
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
10/7/2012 |
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Hmmm I am thinking this is perhaps a Succubus
but not one who came to the man while he slept
but has carried on this eerily act for many
ages! Keep going!
I am loving this :)
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
10/6/2012 |
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Oh! My! *La Belle*
intriging mystery
is such a gift
possessed by You
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
10/6/2012 |
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ahhh waiting for number five and more
budd |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
10/6/2012 |
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| I was patient waiting for the other posts, now I just can't wait, I want to turn the page like he will with that bed. Oh and that bed Belle, just wicked....i've been seduced right into these poems. |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
10/6/2012 |
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I guess you are on a roll, Belle...also You like to
hold on to the suspense as long as you can...Can't Wait!
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
10/6/2012 |
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| Oh, how I love being strung along for a nice tale. You are keeping my interest! Be well, Kathy |
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