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Next Year...
It’s been five years
Living in the moment
Wiping away tears
It’s been an alignment.
Fall’s weather surrounds
Geese flying south.
They flew it yesterday
Word of mouth.
A rainy, cool day
Another year’s reminder
Speaking of yesterday
Will next fall be kinder?
Deborah Ann Tornillo
Copyright, 2012
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
10/16/2012 |
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| Yes it will be. A wonderful time for You and Yours.......Always, Tony. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/9/2012 |
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Sometimes rainy fall weather brings a funk. After five years, I hope you get out of it soon. Time is too short to spend it down.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
10/8/2012 |
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| I sure hope next year will be better. Your poem reminded me of my days in Vermont when fall was coming...M |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
10/8/2012 |
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| I think we all hope and wonder if next year will be better when we are grappling with the passing one...you ask the question eloquently, and surprisingly timed as I think many of us have these types of reflections near the end of the calendar year...I believe that small surprise just makes the entire poem more interesting, and Fall is notorious for heralding the end, and depression as the sunlight is withdrawn. Very nice work. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
10/8/2012 |
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all the seasons pass at thier specific pace and there is much to remember in each
budd |
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