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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
10/22/2012 |
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| Excellent expression, Dana I find it odd that some people try not to be obvious in their deceit but it sometimes defeats them. This can be compared to the original (father of the lie) Satan, when he deceived Eve and the forbidden fruit turned out to be rotten in its core when they lost this perfection...now he has no escape. |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
10/12/2012 |
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Good writing, makes sense, it happens to many ,,,,they get locked inside, and lose everything.... noone is the perfect bride.
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/12/2012 |
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| Another young woman's sad story here. if this is not a work of fiction I feel for you. Our daughter endured a similar situation. She still remains wounded; five years down the road. People use each other anymore like plastic spoons and forks and then dispose of them. A sad state of affairs. Very little honor anymore. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/11/2012 |
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You left me thinking that maybe you spent some time in that cage and now you are announcing how you got out.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
10/11/2012 |
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the protection of ones heart from the hunter, well done
budd |
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