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My Daughters
by Deborah Ann Tornillo

Thursday, October 11, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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 My Daughters


Tell me your story

I hear your pain

It’s okay babies...

Dance in the rain.


Tomorrow will come

Yesterday we try.

In the moment

We will cry.


A future real

Feel’s uncertain


A final curtain.


Stay focused

First born and last

Love is the answer

It goes by so fast.


Deborah Ann Tornillo

Copyright, 2012

Deborah Tornillo
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Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/12/2012
a beautiful Write Enjoyed reading
Love & Peace be with you

Reviewed by Budd Nelson 10/12/2012
they do grow up way to fast
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/12/2012
I sense a real concern for their welfare. It is within you to make sure that your daughters are safe and secure. To not leave it to others. If you give them freedom, they will explore on their own and learn from their experience. If you hold them to close, they will become dependent upon you and on others after you're gone.

Reviewed by John Domino 10/11/2012
Dear Deborah,

A lot of thought went into your poem.
An incomplete, broken and uncertain life can still be mended with care and love.

GOD is love...

God bless you Deborah!

Peace, love and blessings,

John Michael

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