|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|Boy can I identify. I deliberately bought a home with no basement for this very reason... no kidding. But I still go around with silly weapons like brooms when things go bump in the night! Nice piece.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Perfect for Holloween...~E|
|Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader)
|Scary and wonderful!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|You should write a book. This prosaic piece reveals that writing talent. Very well done from someone who konws. Bill|
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|This is very expressive and strong in the images it portrays, great write, well held together, well done, take care...Mark...|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Oh yeah...just sweep your scares right out ofthe room why dont you LOL Halloween isnt until next week Dee. this gave me the heebie jeebies|
|Reviewed by richard poor
|you know i like the scary stuff...very good!!!|
|Reviewed by Larry K
|Very scary... and I think we all can relate to that feeling of naked fear at one time in our lives. Very well written.|
|Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)
|Ok lets shed some light on this.
first of all this was a very erie write and second it was so scary that i doubt having as man there would help because i would be grabbing the same broom and trying to fly the hell away from there..into the "Knight"
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Scary, this brought back memories, spent my childhood in an old house like this, can still feel the creepy chills when I think about it and in reading your poem. Great work.|
|Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader)
|Sounds like a scene from a horror movie! The creaking never helps, especially late at night. Creepy write!
|Reviewed by jing javier
|Reviewed by jude forese
|be careful of the sounds
that surface at night
echoing through halls
revealing their plight :0
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You can borrow me..
Scary living alone..
I did for 15 years, and
now I have to protect a woman
and two kids.......Great write...get a little dog
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|((((HUGS)))) be careful, dee...this was a terrifying read!! have someone stay with you...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. wish i HAD a basement...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is perfect for Halloween;-)Sorry you had such a night, get someone to check that cellar out, I wouldn't wait!great write...|
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
|crikey Dee, poor you. Bets its just a cat or something that got stuck.
You made a great piece of poetry out of your situation anyway.